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Re: Eternal Rome. 01.
Hi Jiggity. I rather liked this piece. You touched on the city as a whole being defined by the people who live within it, their hopes and their dreams. It's ...
Nov 15, 2008 -
Re: The Elephant Boy {seventeen}
Oh. My. Goodness. This was good, Ky. Very good. Superb even. The only bone I've got to pick with you in this whole thing is the first part, where it's ...
Nov 15, 2008 -
Re: Scritch Scratch Medley
insanity scratched on tabletops amid the coffee rings and the cookie crumbs fallen from errant lips into the laps of pretty girls Scritch Scratch Scritch Scratch it's still getting carved ...
Nov 12, 2008 -
Re: The Masquerade- Pt. 2
“So,” Chloe said, “What are we doing after this?” “Why do you want to talk about that?” Melanie asked. “I only just got here. I want to enjoy the party ...
Nov 12, 2008 -
Re: The Elephant Boy {sixteen}
It's me, Ky! Your ever-faithful Dr. Watson-er, Conrad Rice! I stole that from your review of The Masquerade Part 1, ha ha. Anyways, this was a much better representation of ...
Nov 12, 2008 -
Re: Come closer, my pretties. (Re-Opened!)
If you've got the time, I'd like it if you'd look at this. It's a longer story, to be split into parts for the viewing ease of everyone. If you ...
Nov 8, 2008 -
Re: Clo Needs You!
The first in what will be a long story, split into parts for the viewing ease of all. If you don't want to review each part, that's okay. I will ...
Nov 8, 2008 -
Re: The Elephant Boy {fifteen}
Hi Ky. I'm here for my review of part 15. This was an improvement from part 14, a definite improvement. Peter actually seemed like a real person to me this ...
Nov 8, 2008 -
Re: The Masquerade- Pt. 1
The Masquerade: Part 1 Melanie poised herself on Adam’s arm as they walked up to the entrance of the ballroom. The soft lights and the orchestral music of the masquerade ...
Nov 8, 2008 -
Re: Young Writers Literary Journal: Second Volume
This will be such awesomeness. I can't wait to submit something.
Nov 8, 2008 -
Re: Short-story Writing
A short story is easier for me, because its length tends to hold my attention for longer. I usually write most of my short stories in a day or so, ...
Nov 7, 2008 -
Re: Would a character smoking in a novel bother you?
No, a character smoking in a novel has never bothered me. You really shouldn't worry about what people think about this sort of thing though. Personally, I'm more worried about ...
Nov 7, 2008 -
Re: Mass Word War!
That is just how I roll. Actually, I was just having a really good night. But then again, everybody who participated was. Kudos for everyone! :)
Nov 6, 2008 -
Re: Anonymous Anger Rampant On Web
Big props to Big Brother!
Nov 5, 2008 -
Re: Barack Obama - President Elect
I'm a McCain supporter who's still suspicious of Obama's past, but I'll congratulate him. He did make history, after all. Thank goodness the insanity's over now.
Nov 5, 2008
